Remorse and Atonement

Crow Boy by Taro Yashima and A Hun­dred Dress­es by Eleanor Estes are mod­ern clas­sics. Pub­lished over fifty years ago, nei­ther has been out of print to date and both con­tin­ue to be wide­ly read. Books of con­science, with strong moral con­tent, these are about pover­ty, out­siders, bul­ly­ing, and bystanders: issues as per­ti­nent today as when these books were cre­at­ed. Told from the point of view of a child who wit­nessed the mis­treat­ment of anoth­er, joined in, and did noth­ing to stop or alle­vi­ate it, these are sto­ries of remorse.

The Hundred Dresses by Eleanor Estes and Louis Slobodkin

Of the many choic­es a writer makes, a key deci­sion is when to begin the sto­ry. In The Hun­dred Dress­es, at the begin­ning of the sto­ry, a cen­tral char­ac­ter is miss­ing: “Today, Mon­day, Wan­da Petron­s­ki was not in her seat.” Wan­da nev­er reap­pears. Her fam­i­ly has moved to the city, away from the prej­u­dice of the small town: “No more holler Polack. No more ask why fun­ny name.” The sto­ry con­cerns the things that were done to Wan­da by class­mates before the sto­ry begins and the remorse felt by Mad­die, a reluc­tant par­tic­i­pant in the teasing.

Crow Boy by Taro Yashima

Crow Boy begins with the first appear­ance of Chibi: “On the first day of our vil­lage school in Japan, there was a boy miss­ing. He was found hid­den away in the dark space under­neath the school­house floor.” The nar­ra­tor is a class­mate and the sto­ry spans the six years spent togeth­er in the vil­lage school. Although the use of time dif­fers in these books, both are con­cerned with events remem­bered, with actions that can­not be undone.

Chibi and Wan­da Petron­s­ki are out­siders, chil­dren marked by pover­ty. They live on the out­skirts of town. Even their clothes set them apart. “Wan­da didn’t have any friends. She came to school alone and went home alone. She always wore a fad­ed blue dress that didn’t hang right. It was clean, but it looked as though it had nev­er been ironed prop­er­ly.” Chibi “was left alone in the study time. He was left alone in the play time … A for­lorn lit­tle tag-along.” He “always car­ried the same lunch, a rice ball wrapped in a radish leaf. Even when it rained or stormed he still came trudg­ing along, wrapped in a rain­coat made from dried zebra grass.”

illus­tra­tion © Taro Yashima, from Crow Boy, pub­lished by Viking Press, 1955 (renewed 1983)

Chibi, frozen by fear and unable to learn, is soon taunt­ed: “ … not only the chil­dren in our class but the old­er ones and even the younger ones called him stu­pid and slow­poke.” Wan­da, too, is taunt­ed, but more sub­tly, by the girls in her class who bait her to talk about the clothes she claims to have at home — the hun­dred dress­es. “They often wait­ed for Wan­da Petron­s­ki — to have fun with her.” The word­ing here is knife sharp — to have fun with her, like cats play­ing with a doomed mouse.

We learn about Wan­da from the remem­brances of Mad­die, whose friend Peg­gy led the attacks. The deci­sion to begin the sto­ry after Wan­da has moved away mag­ni­fies Maddie’s guilt over their treat­ment of Wan­da. The teas­ing has already occurred. If Wan­da was present, it would have con­tin­ued: before they learn that she has moved, the girls wait on the usu­al cor­ner hop­ing to entrap Wan­da again. The teas­ing stops only because Wan­da does not appear. The deci­sion to begin the sto­ry here leaves room for the explo­ration of Maddie’s con­science. Peg­gy, the insti­ga­tor, is less affect­ed by guilt. She pro­vides an excel­lent con­trast, able to jus­ti­fy her mis­treat­ment: “What did the girl want to go and say she had a hun­dred dress­es for? … Why did she want to lie? And she wasn’t just an ordi­nary per­son, else why would she have a name like that? Any­way, they nev­er made her cry.”

Maddie’s unwill­ing­ness to inter­rupt the teas­ing stems from fear that Peg­gy might turn on her next. “But sup­pose Peg­gy and the oth­ers start­ed in on her next? She wasn’t as poor as Wan­da per­haps, but she was poor.” Uneasy dur­ing the teas­ing, Mad­die is filled with remorse as she remem­bers her inac­tion. She fan­ta­sizes scenes in which she defends Wan­da: “‘Stop! This girl is just a girl just like you are….’” She vis­its Wanda’s house hop­ing to make amends but the house is vacant. With Peg­gy, she writes Wan­da a let­ter. “They had meant to say they were sor­ry, but it end­ed up with their just writ­ing a friend­ly let­ter, the kind they would have writ­ten to any good friend, and they signed it with lots of X’s for love.”

Wan­da and Chibi do not retal­i­ate. Pos­si­bly Wan­da does not under­stand the sub­tle­ty of Peggy’s mock­ing or per­haps her lone­li­ness push­es her to talk to the girls. Chibi with­draws into his own world which Yashima depicts in words and pic­tures. Both chil­dren use imag­i­na­tion to escape their nar­row and lone­ly lives. “Soon Chibi began to make his eyes cross-eyed so that he was not able to see what­ev­er he did not want to see.” (The illus­tra­tions show chil­dren mock­ing him.) He finds things to inter­est him in the class­room and out­side: pat­terns, sounds, insects, birds. Wan­da cre­ates the hun­dred dress­es, draw­ings that she sends back to the school; she wins the medal for art but she is not there to receive it.

The Hundred Dresses by Eleanor Estes and Louis Slobodkin
illus­tra­tion © Louis Slo­bod­kin, The Hun­dred Dress­es, writ­ten by Eleanor Estes, Har­court, Brace, 1944

The change in both books occurs in the atti­tude of the chil­dren towards these out­siders. In Crow Boy, a new teacher, Mr. Isobe, takes an inter­est in Chibi and dis­cov­ers his many gifts: the draw­ings he makes of nature, the unique hand­writ­ing he has invent­ed, his knowl­edge of plants. Chibi per­forms in the tal­ent show, imi­tat­ing the voic­es of crows. “Everyone’s mind was tak­en to the far moun­tain­side from which Chibi prob­a­bly came to school. … Every one of us cried, think­ing how much we had been wrong to Chibi all these long years.” 

The final actions of both — Wanda’s hun­dred dress­es, and her gift of draw­ings to the ring­lead­ers of the teas­ing girls, and Chibi’s imi­ta­tion of crows at the tal­ent show — reveal who they have been all along. Chibi cap­tures his long, lone­ly walk and the tiny farm where he lives. Wanda’s gift, the out­pour­ing of her imag­i­na­tion, shows a wealth of cre­ativ­i­ty that her class­mates nev­er sus­pect­ed. These gifts change the per­cep­tions of their class­mates and teachers.

Crow Boy ends hap­pi­ly. The chil­dren no longer call him Chibi, or tiny boy. Now when he comes to the mar­ket, they respect­ful­ly call him Crow Boy and he responds with a hap­py crow call. The dis­mis­sive nick­name is replaced with one of admi­ra­tion. It is a pos­i­tive end­ing, a full resolution.

But in The Hun­dred Dress­es no such res­o­lu­tion is achieved. Peg­gy is able to con­vince her­self that Wanda’s gift of a por­trait means all is for­giv­en: “‘What did I say! … She must have real­ly liked us’.” But Mad­die is not con­vinced and, unable to for­get her par­tic­i­pa­tion in the teas­ing, she cries when she remem­bers Wan­da “stand­ing alone in that sun­ny spot in the school yard close to the wall, look­ing stolid­ly over at the group of laugh­ing girls.” The Hun­dred Dress­es ends with Maddie’s con­science still trou­bled, her pain acute.

Crow Boy and The Hun­dred Dress­es expose the suf­fer­ing of the out­sider, the cru­el­ty of bul­lies, and appro­pri­ate remorse which ends in atone­ment. As with the best of sto­ries, these leave it to read­ers to draw con­clu­sions and pon­der the appli­ca­tions to our own lives.

WORKS CITED

Estes, Eleanor. The Hun­dred Dress­es. New York: Har­court, 1944.

Mur­phy, Kate. “Maya Angelou,” New York Times. 20 April 2013. Web 2 Apr 2016.

Yashima, Taro. Crow Boy. New York: Viking, 1955.

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Heidi Hammond
Heidi Hammond
8 months ago

This was a poignant arti­cle. Thank you. Even though the copy­rights are long ago, I hope these books con­tin­ue to be shared with chil­dren today.

Christine McDonnell
Christine McDonnell
Reply to  Heidi Hammond
8 months ago

They are so time­less. I also hope they will stay in print. Some­times the medals help.

Marcia Parks
Marcia Parks
8 months ago

These two books have so much to teach chil­dren – and the world – today. I hope they nev­er go out of print. In fact, I would love to see an anniver­sary edi­tion of Crow Boy, orig­i­nal­ly pub­lished in 1955.

Christine McDonnell
Christine McDonnell
Reply to  Marcia Parks
8 months ago

Hav­ing the medals help books stay in print. An anniver­sary edi­tion –full size – would be wonderful

Jackie Briggs Martin
8 months ago

Thank you for this essay, Chris­tine. You are right. These books are clas­sics and deserved to be read by all of us, more than once.

Christine McDonnell
Christine McDonnell
Reply to  Jackie Briggs Martin
8 months ago

Jack­ie, they both hold up so well. I was struck by the craft in The Hun­dred Dress­es– the dif­fer­ence in the two girls, the absence of Wan­da. Her absence adds so much to the story.

Robin K.
Robin K.
8 months ago

Each Kind­ness by Jacque­line Wood­son is anoth­er book to use with these two.

Christine McDonnell
Christine McDonnell
Reply to  Robin K.
8 months ago

What a good sug­ges­tion. Thank you.